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Visit Venus' Hospital-01/02/11


“Visit Venus' Hospital”
Written by Loi
In January 2, 2011

We care for Venus
And make sure if she is fine
We encourage Venus
To healthy dine

We care for Venus
And make sure if she got
no pain
We encourage Venus
To pray Jehovah as remain

Venus is happy to see us
visit her in the hospital
Before preaching,
I get on the bus
To preaching group,
and then we visit Venus' hospital







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