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"Religion"
Written by Loi in 2008 and revised in 2011

After Adam and Eve had disobeyed God,
All mankind sin and then die
We blame Adam and Eve
For mankind need a religion
And why do they search for a true God
Every time we see people
Argue about a religion that they think is true
But others say false
This cause us to feel so tired
We are not interesting in a Religion
We only wish that Adam and Eve obey God
For living in a beautiful earth forever
If they obey God,
Then all mankind will be happy today
As long as we never have a religion


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