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Let Me Go

"Let Me Go"
Written by Loi in 2010 and revised in 2011

I associated with the wrong people
My life was getting stuck with them
And I was missing what they don't
have from me
Like the meaning of stealing
my money
Yes, the wrong people did stole
my money
And its all gone
and won't come back to me
I was crying and crying
And I don't know why I did
choose the wrong people

I have to learn how to be
cautious on what people
do to me
As I learn my lesson
God! The bad people should let me go
Because of I need money
as to take care of myself

I want the bad people to let me go
Because of they are not worthy
for me
But if they want to be my friend,
they need to have a well-trained
personalities
Such like love,
peace,
kindness,
goodness,
faith,
mildness,
self-control
and compassion
And so that its can effect me
to be a positive thought
and to do well
Happy  



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