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Should I Leave My Parents' Home


"Should I Leave My Parents' Home?"
Written by Loi in 2008, 2009,
and revised in 2011

Should I leave my parents' home?
Well, I'm not ready
But I have a trouble at home
Like I don't agree with my parents

I don't like to follow my parents' rules
They don't allow me to date a boy from my school

Should I leave my parents' home?
Well, I must work hard to show prove
that I am an independent woman
And so my parents approve.








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