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Before I Leave Home


"Before I Leave Home"
Written by Loi in 2008
and revised in 2011

I must work hard to make a good decision
I also learn how to get along with people
It is not easy for me to treat others nicely
Even when people are not nice to me

The personality that I need to improve
As treating others well
'kindness, goodness, mildness, and self-control'
These traits must be applied by me as a Christian woman

When I dedicated to Jehovah,
I began to a spiritual journey
Then why do I have to hurry for leaving home?
Well, I talk to my folks about when the time is right
They may be happy to have me stay at home
Especially if I support my family
I can continue to grow, learn, and mature right there at home.

 







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