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"Finally"
Written by Loiriam Jimenez
in January 6, 2009
and revised in March 8, 2011

I made the calls this morning
Everything all sets
And I finally make its
Because the only thing is to get if it is not that hard
But the junk things I go ahead to discard

When I leave my parents' home,
All I do is to live on own and support myself
It is not so easy to do
But I am trying my best
Because nobody can help me
They have to focus on themselves
I know human tend to not help one another
So I accept and do my best
And get experience in a real world
and that I can pass the test

See-finally I can do it
And not need to depend on other
All I decide to use the words taught by my brother

Which mean to able to do the best, finally!







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