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 Smile-03/15/11


"Smile"
Written by Loi in March 15, 2011

When I smile,
some people view me
as a beautiful white teeth
But this time is turned to become older
With a sore smile
But no matter what
I still smile
Smile is a good mood that
That people love to see me smile
"Smile, Loiriam," people love to say that to me
Smile
Smile
"Ouch, my cheeks are caning...Oh, hi friends," I gasped with silent
and slight grin
Smile is all I want
I smile at all people.


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