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Paradise (Will I Live?)


"Paradise (Will I Live?)"
written by Loi in 2005, 2006
and revised in 2011

I remember
I raise the truth
I can pray
If it was in the truth
But my life goes on
I'm not the different
I keep on the watch
My face is not so different
Go up to the sky
(If I'm the righteous)
Go down to the hell
(If I'm the unrighteous)
Hard to believe the truth
It means I'm in darkness
The paradise,
Will I live in brightness?
Yo acuerdo
El verdad
Yo puedo rezar
Si eso es verdad
Pero me vital va puesta
Nada es diferente
Yo mantengo a la Mirada
Nada de mi cara es diferente
Walk myself on me
I myself could see
The angels with Father
 I'll live in paradise forever
If I learn the chance
I'll rely on Father
If I could have a chance
To believe the Father
There is a light
On my eyes
So I keep on the watch









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