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“Day”
Written by Loi in 2006
And revised in 2011

INTRO:
 I thought that we should go to the meeting on every Sunday.
But Jesus works over the Sabbath Day
in which means that we must have faith than having a sight.
Here is how I feel about wanting to go to the meeting on every one day
not just every three days.

I wonder why the servant can't go on every one day.
Day is you have to go
Don't ever listen to what they say
‘Cause this is a false schedule that we must not go
Every three days a week is not observing by early Christian
I believe that Sabbath Day is Saturday for Jews and Sunday for Christians
Sabbath Day means you have to work on six days and on seventh day are rest
(not always have to work in six days but part time)
But, but, but I must go on every three days a week, not working days, unrest
‘Cause the cruel false servant force me to go
I should not but they said so
It is not my life
I still have to strife
Wish I should go on every one day but that's not always happen
And when I was eighteen, I tried to convert Catholic
But this tend to not going that happen
‘Cause I can't change the fellowship
Why can't they respect my life?
All the time they think that I am an easy girl.










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