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“Hurry Up”
Written by Loi in 2009
And revised in 2011

The time is so fast
The time is so fast
Because of I'm so late

Every time I try to be ready for the bus
I'm in hurry up
I hurry up to get on the bus
Aw, I miss the bus
I have to wait for the next bus
I'm fed up
I'm so tired of riding a bus

The time is so fast
And those who miss the bus have to wait for the next one
But they don't have time to wait
Those who have time is running out and is late
Late at work is not fun
And it can make the boss upset

I'm so late
I don't know what to do

The time is so fast
The time is so fast
I don't know what to do
Maybe I can be ready for the next day



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