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I Want to DRIVE

"I Want to DRIVE"
Written by Loi in 2009

I don't have a license,
which I'm not allowed to drive
But I want to drive to anywhere
Like an example of I want to go to the mall
But I must be on time for work
I need to be there at work
Because of I don't have time to walk and ride on the bus
The bus take two hours to ride to work, lose my two hours at home
But the car is less than an hour to work

I have a permit,
and I need to learn how to drive
But nobody teach me how to drive
But I told them that I want to drive...
Because of I don't have time to walk and ride on the bus
The bus take two hours to ride to work, lose my two hours at home
I don't like to depend on you drivers, I like to drive myself
However, you drivers don't care about what I want
You only care about your precious car and the gas
Plus, you worry about an insurance to pay more
I understand that but I want to DRIVE!!!
You said you have to work all day for the car
And you suggested me to use the bus for cheap, fine
But I hate to ride on the bus
The bus time and the car time are very different
That why I want to DRIVE!!!
Period.



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