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30 Minutes-06/15/11

“30 Minutes”
Written by Loi in June 15, 2011

I

The meeting was done
I associated with brothers and sisters in 30 minutes
Then done
And decided to go home
However, I had no ride by myself
Cos the night was overnight made by Sabbath to extend talkative
And it forced me to wait

I began to feel exhausted and needed to go home
In sub of me expressing this poem
While I had to wait for the Sabbath to finish the conversation

Can I go home now?
No, we talk more than 30 minutes
Oh, Lord

But to inform the Sabbath that I don't have a time to spare the conversation
And I'm done with this congregation

I confide in God Jehovah that he will take care of my problems
And I will be thankful if He allows me to associate within 30 minutes
So enough with those more than 30 minutes
Amen!

II

I understand that Sabbath want to chat more than 30 minutes
And it interested to me
I respect his want of staying in the conversation with more than 30 minutes.

III

Though we're unfair
However, I can't change the Sabbath
Cos he need to stay in the conversation with more than 30 minutes
That fine with me
But in my feeling,
I can't stay more than 30 minutes
I believe that 30 minutes is enough to talk and leave the congregation for home
What I'm going to do is to next time I ask Bond for joining her car to home
She always leave congregation a little bit early for tomorrow sunrise work
When Bond says ‘Yes'
Then I inform Sabbath to replace me from his car to her car as speaking the truth.





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