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 An Embarrassment of Me Carrying the Clothes-06/24/11


“An Embarrassment of Me Carrying the Clothes”
Written by Loi in June 24, 2011

My plan isn't good
As I'm not a planning person

When I got on the bus,
I was looking for Plato's Closet
But I did not find that place until Jen informed me the right one
The bus driver was laughing at me standing with my cart
And looking for Plato's Closet
This is an embarrassment of me carrying the clothes

After I got off the bus,
I was walking on Jefferson plus East Henrietta streets
And looking for Plato's Closet
But I did not find that place until Jen informed me the right one
Almost many people in cars were glancing at me pushing my cart
And the man stand outside Starbucks looking at me like that
With his laugh of me carrying the clothes
This is an embarrassment of me carrying the clothes

I'm a pathetic jerk that I follow the wrong people who use me for money
That why I'm trying to sell the clothes and other things
And try to make a good income
Sadly, the people whom I don't know are so careless about my financial situation.




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