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 People Have Gone Crazy-Part 2-07/03/11


“People Have Gone Crazy-part 2”
Written by Loi in July 3, 2011

The people have gone crazy
Hurrying
Pushing
And buying
Before it's too late

I came to Wal-Mart
And I have seen people were hurrying, pushing, and buying
Before it's too late to get for July 4th-the celebration of America!

Note: Tomorrow new poem title “America or Jehovah.”

America or Jehovah
World or God
I choose Jehovah
‘Because I am so confused of which shall I follow
America or Jehovah
World or God
-Loi-


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