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 Check Up-07/05/2011


“Check Up”
Written by Loi in July 5, 2011

Cadaver
Habiliments taking off
Earn life
Careful of what I eat
Know my body

Uncover the mouth by stranger make me feeling sick
Pain of a lot sneezes

I went to check up for backache.



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