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When I Received a Feedback/Some of You-Revised

When I Received a Feedback/Some of You
Written by Loi in May 17, 2008
And revised in October 14, 2011

When I received a feedback
Some of you don't put down your name
This lack of being an unknown person
What a shame!
But, if you don't want me to know who wrote it on my poetry site as you feel afraid
to put down your name on it that is fine
But it is important for me to know who it is
Don't be afraid, I won't bite you
Put your name on it and if you do, then it would be the best

When I received a feedback,
Some of you encouraged me to improve my grammar
So that I can edit my poetry work
And to improve my grammar
I have been learning English since I was at aged seven
I have been speaking Spanish, my first language since I was born
I was born hearing, not deaf
I was speaking Spanish until stop at aged 13 when I was on grade seven
Because of my private school didn't have a foreign language class
(But now have it only in Spanish class)
So that I forget Spanish
But I speak a very tiny Spanish
Because of my parents speak a strong Spanish
Now that my Spanish is better
I keep learning Spanish everyday

When I received a feedback,
Some of you loved my poetry and wanted me to keep writing
I love to write poetry
I'm too addicted to write poetry
I NEVER want to stop writing poetry
I WRITE POETRY FOREVER!!!! ROCK MY POETRY, LOL!!!!



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