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CONSTRUCTIVE CRITIQUE--DREAM WEAVER



We agree on constructive critique
So little given least it offend
I flunked poetry in the eleventh grade
Can use all the help I can get
Sadly so many are looking for Critique
So few help other and then someone take
the critique badly. I critiqued one time
a complimentary but helpful from another's eyes.
I assumed I me mine, it flowed without these words
"Who are you tell tell me. I am a world renowned poet."
I have read the Masters didn't find her name
You don't leave away to critique and
I am not into sending e-mails in space.








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