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WHAT HAPPENS WHEN I DIE

By Dan Donlan, www.PoetryPoem.com/dandy1    Unlock all Features - Upgrade to Poetry Prime


You get older you think about such things
In my case did I follow the Ten Commandments
Cheat a little now and then
Who knows we are not all perfect
But I am confident I have to face Judgment
My Dad well be shoveling the coal for me
Maybe I well just be up in Limbo
Waiting in limbo with drug addicted and murderers
Drug addicted stuck in limbo with no drugs
Gang related left alone with no gang protection
I think I well take my chance following the ten commandments
But what about a terrorist?
Does he really believe 72 virgins are waiting
While the dudes who told him that have nine wives
And are not giving up their lives but hiding in caves
What about a Muslim who prays for peace?
I can't hold anything for what his brothers are doing
Maybe the fact that he himself is doing nothing
Because if there are 72 virgins they may be his children
Unless you believe terrorists are honorable with a cause?
My own opinion, what happens is what I have done in life








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