John's poems of...LIFE - LIVING &LOVE...JDJ
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looking for feedback , a compliment or praise:
is really all that i have to look forward to these days:
i feel disappointed when nothing, at all to me is said:
it seems that my poems are not even being read:
when i look at my poetry site,and see that nobody messaged me:
this is what i dread to see:
when i check my site,to myself i even pray:
let go let god, please guide thy way:
thy will not mine be done:
if someone wants to give me feedback or none:
i am just lonely and alone:
after this divorce, i have no home of my own:
i am trying to define just who i am:
im trying to be the best that i can:
when i write out a new poem:
i am proud to my poetry list another new one i own:
i think to myself, that my poems that i write are my wealth:
the words that i write in the poems, are the same words to myself that i pray:
so thats it, and i will just give it to god, and hope someone can give me some feed back today:
people need a compliment, a pat on the back , encouragement and praise:
a positive heartfelt loving comment for us all goes a long, long way:
do your best to show random kindness to even a stranger as you pass the by:
because when you see another person, you just never know deep inside how they are hurting and deeply sigh:
so thats that, and i continue to just write what i feel:
if i stop my writing. that will stop the wheel:
so one day my simple poems will become known:
simple and true as johns poems of life, living and love, humbly to the world revealed and honestly shown:
take care god bless:
be loving, kind, caring and nice. be uplifting to others and compliment them , do your best:
we all can use a little compliment and praise:
when our life gets cloudy, and we cant see clearly through the haze:
john d, jungers
22--march--2015:
is really all that i have to look forward to these days:
i feel disappointed when nothing, at all to me is said:
it seems that my poems are not even being read:
when i look at my poetry site,and see that nobody messaged me:
this is what i dread to see:
when i check my site,to myself i even pray:
let go let god, please guide thy way:
thy will not mine be done:
if someone wants to give me feedback or none:
i am just lonely and alone:
after this divorce, i have no home of my own:
i am trying to define just who i am:
im trying to be the best that i can:
when i write out a new poem:
i am proud to my poetry list another new one i own:
i think to myself, that my poems that i write are my wealth:
the words that i write in the poems, are the same words to myself that i pray:
so thats it, and i will just give it to god, and hope someone can give me some feed back today:
people need a compliment, a pat on the back , encouragement and praise:
a positive heartfelt loving comment for us all goes a long, long way:
do your best to show random kindness to even a stranger as you pass the by:
because when you see another person, you just never know deep inside how they are hurting and deeply sigh:
so thats that, and i continue to just write what i feel:
if i stop my writing. that will stop the wheel:
so one day my simple poems will become known:
simple and true as johns poems of life, living and love, humbly to the world revealed and honestly shown:
take care god bless:
be loving, kind, caring and nice. be uplifting to others and compliment them , do your best:
we all can use a little compliment and praise:
when our life gets cloudy, and we cant see clearly through the haze:
john d, jungers
22--march--2015:
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