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A response to sorow

By aldo kraas, www.PoetryPoem.com/poet11586    Unlock all Features - Upgrade to Poetry Prime

I get that you might feel like shit
and you just need to express it
I do enjoy the darker tones
I feel the same aches in my bones
but what I see is a wrathful need
to tear apart what others speak
to rip those spoken angels down,
and fashion their feathers into a crown
My words of love, of life and light
you rearrange to loathe and blight,
but you don't need my instruction
to fuel your own self destruction
if this is what you want to be
then bow your head and drop your knee
affirm your allegiance to chaos and strife
walk the darker side of life
but be careful where you lay your blame
know that from where you were is from where you came
it's you that chose to play this game
my life continues just the same
if not better for knowing your name.

I get that you might feel like shit
and you just need to express it
I do enjoy the darker tones
I feel the same aches in my bones
but what I see is a wrathful need
to tear apart what others speak
to rip those spoken angels down,
and fashion their feathers into a crown
My words of love, of life and light
you rearrange to loathe and blight,
but you don't need my instruction
to fuel your own self destruction
if this is what you want to be
then bow your head and drop your knee
affirm your allegiance to chaos and strife
walk the darker side of life
but be careful where you lay your blame
know that from where you were is from where you came
it's you that chose to play this game
my life continues just the same
if not better for knowing your name.








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