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 A letter to Gallway


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Dear Olive

I sit here now listening to Nick Cave's new CD
Remember when we went to see him at Brixton Academy?
Arms round your waist, holding you tight
Still goes down as my most wonderful night
I don't know what made me so mad
I shared with you my life told you about dad
Never really done that before let someone be close
Your lips were like the sweetest red rose
"we were friends that's as far as it went"
Although i pursed you with a lust filled relent
And i lost a Friend, because of my madness
A battle between Lust and kindness
Going to those gigs, hand in hand
In love with each other, but nothing was planned
Late night drinking in the spinning wheel
me not knowing what to feel
My heart cut open when you went away
My mouth dried up with no words to say
When you told me you were going to Australia
God how i missed yer
I wrote those stupid emails
Ranting and raving about drunken Irish girls
I remember walking on China's great wall
Thinking what an idiot i was a complete fool
Then i put your photo on HotorNot
Just to see what score you got
And that was my worst and final mistake
And the last contact i would ever make
So many years ago now, since we last said hello
But i am writing you this just to let you know
That although this poem you will never read
This is one wound that will always bleed
I still think about you now, till this very day
So i am writing you this letter to the west coast of Gallway.










See the poem about love tinted glasses..a broken heart throws ones emotions all over the place. Took me years to recover over her. I was planing to move to Ireland if need be..Amazing really, almost 4-5 yrs on from writing this poem, i kinda find myself in a similar situation..I hope it's not going to take another 4 yrs to heal..Lifes a funny old game..


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