(YOU WILL NOTICE A FEW OTHER POEMS ON MY SITE WHICH I INTENDED TO LENGTHEN. MY GOAL WITH ANY WORK ISN'T QUANTITY BUT QUALITY BUT SOME DIDN'T REACH THEIR INTENDED CONCLUSION YET OR JUST NEEDED MORE THAN I HAD IN ME THAT MOMENT. THESE ARE SEVERAL WORKS I HAVE BEEN WORKING ON BUT SINCE THIS SITE OFFERS FEEDBACK I AM OPEN FOR SUGGESTIONS FOR THESE UNFINISHED WORKS! EACH BREAK INDICATES A NEW POEM!)
DON'T ASK ME WHY
DON'T ASK ME HOW
BUT I'VE GOT A NEW RELIGION
I WORSHIP YOU!
IT'S A SIMPLE FAITH
I'VE BEEN CONVERTED
YOU WANT TO SEE MY EMOTIONAL SCAR
IT'S THE LONGEST ONE BY FAR
IT RUNS FROM INSIDE THE CENTER OF MY HEART
AND TOUCHES NEARLY EVERY PART
WE HAD SIX MONTHS AND THEY WERE GREAT
THEN EVERYTHING STARTED TO DETERIORATE
YOU HAD MY SON, YOU STOLE MY SOUL
NOTHING ANYMORE CAN MAKE ME WHOLE
YOU THINK YOU'RE THE GREATEST ONE AROUND
I'M SORRY TO BE THE ONE TO LET YOU DOWN
IF WOMEN WERE JUDGED BY CRUELTY,
I HAVE TO ADMIT, BABE, YOU'RE THE TOPS-
IF WOMEN WERE JUDGED BY TREACHERY,
THEN YOU EASILY MOVE UP ANOTHER NOTCH-
BUT IF WOMEN WERE JUDGED BY THE WAY THEY TREAT THEIR MAN
WELL, THEN, YOUR RATINGS JUST WENT INTO THE CAN
I'M NOT AS THINK AS YOU DRUNK I AM
HONEST, BABE, IT'S ONLY MY SECOND CAN.
THAT VOMITING I DID ON THAT STRANGE MAN
WAS JUST THE RESULT OF SOME REALLY BAD HAM.