John's poems of...LIFE - LIVING &LOVE...JDJ

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feedbacks i have given a few: sorry i have offended some of you:       i didnt mean to rub anyone wrong: im sorry some feel i dont belong:       but for those who i have touched: your positive feedback i appreciated so much:       i am a noc shift nurse: when its slow i have time to read poems of many verse to verse:       before this site i never read any other poems: this site to me was unknown:       i have written so many poems that no one has ever heard: now on this site i want to share my word:       on this site i have read poems of many style: some made me sad,some made me smile:       the poetry here of so many: have blessed me plenty:       some of my feedback ill admit was very general and straight: and i guess i can understand some feel irrate:       but any feedback i have received,i take it as is: from she or his:       i am a writter who has kept his poems in a folder for 11 years straight: now to be heard and discovered i hope to be my fate:       i have to do my best to get discovered and i start here: my vision to be a published writter is clear:       I KNOW YOU ARE A GREAT WRITTER IF ONE PERSON YOU TOUCH:  AND ON THIS SITE WITH MY WRITTINGS I KNOW I HAVE,AND APPRECIATE YOUR FEEDBACKS SO MUCH:       so i hope someone out their will read my poems and compare: that my writtings are good enough for with the world to share:       i want my poems of life--living---and love, to be showcased in a book of my own: i want the world to read my poems heartfelt known:     jdj  09-16-2005      


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