The Unfairness Of Angels

PoetryPoem.com
  theunfairnessofangels
Login
Email Poem | Today's Poetry

 The Iron Knot


Image Hosted by ImageShack.us



Dear Dr I was wondering if you could help me?
I have just come from accident and emergency
I have this pain in my stomach like a heavy feeling
And i walk around as though I'm day-dreaming
It's like my intestines are like iron knots all mangled inside
And sometimes I get emotional, like on the way here I cried
And I have not been feeling very well at all
So that's why I went to the hospital
And they took an X-Ray
But they said I was fine and sent me away
So here I am doc, not knowing what to do about it
I am fed up feeling like a piece of sh!t!
Sorry didn't mean to swear
But if this carries on I'll end up in intensive care
What's that you're prescribing for me?
How much is it? I don't have a lot of money
What you mean it's free
Ok, Ok I will take it, and we will see
Ok Doc If you're telling me if I take this, I will be fine
But I have never heard of this medicine called time?


  Poetry Ad-Free Upgrades  

Vote for this poem

Please Comment On This Poem

Comments

 Email Address

 

Vote for this poem


jackiemoore Poetry by jackiemoore - Feedback and critique apprieciated  
jackiemoore
johnoe Poetry by johnoe - Feedback and critique requested.  
johnoe
poetic2050 Poetry by poetic2050 - Feedback and critique requested.  
poetic2050
acountrygirlspoems Poetry by acountrygirlspoems - Feedback and critique requested.  
acountrygirlspoems
dreamweaver POETRY BY KRIS ~ DREAMWEAVER - ~WELCOME TO DREAMLAND~ Read my Poems to Know me. I am in my poems.  
dreamweaver
pupwee Poetry by pupwee - Feedback and critique requested.  
pupwee
goddesspele 'Unique Poetry by GoddessPele' - `Enchantment Awaits You ~At My Palace Of Dreams! Guestbook/Feedback/Critique/Welcomed!  
goddesspele
theunfairnessofangels

  Sign Guestbook
  Read Guestbook


jackiemoore Poetry by jackiemoore - Feedback and critique apprieciated  
jackiemoore
johnoe Poetry by johnoe - Feedback and critique requested.  
johnoe
poetic2050 Poetry by poetic2050 - Feedback and critique requested.  
poetic2050
acountrygirlspoems Poetry by acountrygirlspoems - Feedback and critique requested.  
acountrygirlspoems
dreamweaver POETRY BY KRIS ~ DREAMWEAVER - ~WELCOME TO DREAMLAND~ Read my Poems to Know me. I am in my poems.  
dreamweaver
pupwee Poetry by pupwee - Feedback and critique requested.  
pupwee



thedurzetbaird
thedurzetbaird
last on: 15-06-2012
theunfairnessofangels
theunfairnessofangels
last on: 16-04-2014


 Privacy Statement | Terms of Use | © 2000-2014 Individual Authors of the Poetry. All rights reserved by authors