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 Harry Sweeden. My life in verse.

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You stop by too read me,
but never will feed me
with critique… for good or for bad?
my poems have less value
with no name to add you
for all of the thoughts that you might have?
My words have real meaning
if you tell me who's reading…?
then I can contemplate all you might say
for it is the reason I write here
to express all my real fears
and know you're not far away.
To help me and guide me
rebuke and chastise me
if my words hold no meaning at all
so please leave me feedback
and promise you'll come back
to tell me if I'm not cool?


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