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 My Loss


Loneliness has taken me
deep within its black cave,
The friends I cared about
who held me up, have all
disappeared,
I have fallen fast to
the ground and shattered,
I try to live but the point
of living to me, was ripped
from my clenched hand,
The part of me that held
joy has burned away,
I wait for the time to
show me whats next, but
I hold back,
To lose friends who have kept
your happiness high,
is an anxiety that haunts forever,
I am not the person I
was anymore, I've become numb
and drowned with agony,
I'm slowly losing my strength,
and I lay looking at the ceiling
as I hear music flow through me,
Feeling as if I did all wrong
and now I'm just a failure,
I didn't have one chance to say
goodbye, but yet I wasn't ready to
and I don't think I ever will be,
I wonder why but it won't
ever help, so I stand quietly
and move less as time tick's.

Kayleigh Frey          
2/3/06


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