~*`Welcome To 'My Never Ending Circle Of Love`*~... ..`By `Janie/mjfb1954`
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~*`OPEN UP YOUR HEART`*~
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As I step into
the bright sunshine today
God's Beauty takes
my breath away,
With so many wondrous things
for us to see
That God has created
for you and me..
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I see the many
different kinds of bird
Each singing their song
to be heard,
Flying over fields of flowers
colored in view
With sounds of nature
singing out to you..
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Open up your heart
taking this beauty in
You'll find much pleasure
making you sing,
True happiness forever
will remain in your heart
Capturing memories
from the very start..
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God created
the universal heavens too
Implanting stars
in a sky so very blue,
Magnificent mysteries
to us He brings
In creating life's
greatest things..
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We must accept God
for His gift of song
Reminding us of
to whom we belong
In showing us His Love
so very strong,
His examples teaches us
right from wrong..
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Author's Note To Poet Advisor4:
Thanks Dear Friend for your wise critiquing
of this poem in that `words in music,
takes away from the reader's concentration
in reading poem, also shorter lines gives
a better perception to vision.
I have revised the lines to be shorter
also turning the `auto play off on video!
giving the reader listening option of song!
The original composition of this poem
was composed in 2007
(have come a long way since then,
however; there is always room for improvement)
and when copying it for re posting,now in 2011,
unfortunately did not take note of its originality.
{Revised©*2011*}
`Mary Jane's Poetry
`Never Ending Circle Of Love`
By:`Janie/mjfb1954`
a.k.a.~'MJB'~
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original Copyright©2007~
~mary jane b~
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