The Darker Side of Poetry
Your God Now (Rewrite)
His bodies broken
Do you dare to come inside?
To witness the self inflicted ruins
Caused by his own selfish doing
His bodies broken
But is he clean this time?
As it's hard to believe after countless lies
And attempts and tries
His minds been stolen
He believes he needs to lie
To save people the worry
And to try and survive
His minds been stolen
Does he live to die?
Years of abuse and lucky escapes
This addiction and habit, his soul is raped
He's shown his weakness
He maintains its just one more time
Strength and reality a thin divide
Anxiously awaiting his one last line
He's shown his weakness
He is now defeated
In this state of sadness and frailty
Is he going to die?
When he was an innocent child
His mother always wondered what he would become
She never thought this would happen to her favourite son
She used to be so happy and proud
Just look at who's become your god now
Do you dare to come inside?
To witness the self inflicted ruins
Caused by his own selfish doing
His bodies broken
But is he clean this time?
As it's hard to believe after countless lies
And attempts and tries
His minds been stolen
He believes he needs to lie
To save people the worry
And to try and survive
His minds been stolen
Does he live to die?
Years of abuse and lucky escapes
This addiction and habit, his soul is raped
He's shown his weakness
He maintains its just one more time
Strength and reality a thin divide
Anxiously awaiting his one last line
He's shown his weakness
He is now defeated
In this state of sadness and frailty
Is he going to die?
When he was an innocent child
His mother always wondered what he would become
She never thought this would happen to her favourite son
She used to be so happy and proud
Just look at who's become your god now
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Your God Now (Rewrite)
Your God Now (Rewrite)
