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Complete Surrender

By Terrence michael Sutton, www.PoetryPoem.com/aussiepoet    Unlock all Features - Upgrade to Poetry Prime

How I could feel the gates of heaven open
So new So fresh so ever lovingly soft
Like a fog so damp as it eased without cramp
As I found my way as if to an angels loft
I felt the greatest feeling of approval
And an angel clutched my hand just so
As if we two how we flew to uncharted stars
A strongest grip as to as if never let go
It was as if the swell upon the deepest ocean
A feeling of a glow from moon and sun as one
Rising and setting over and over once again
A feeling of as if a new world had just begun
Time it seemed as if the longest time to be
Like holding hands we sailed into deepest space
And as well a slow motion I've never known
With the changing emotion glowing upon your face
A pleasure of experiencing something ever new
A complete feeling of taking even the breath away
All of ecstasy it self could never before be
As one until the very dimmest light of day

terrence michael sutton
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