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one cheap sentence
one terse four-letter word: cute nice neat good will never sum up me lacks thoughts complete or finesse a fragment or measly morsel nor the best not even a mouthful or a thoughtful or a brain-filled and oh very painful to read how is it that all its missing is me how indicative of what's between the ears and behind the eyes I'd much rather be pleasantly surprised at some kindness that could be contained within they don't know where I've been but guess and game yet those who'd be heaped with praise are often ungenerous grinding down others into meager miserly over-simplified words SPIT infinitives advice: if you can't say anything constructive pithy wise nice that shakes the foundations of the western world don't say anything at all otherwise (I'm Not Sorry) but, you come off small self-involved dis-ingenuine tight not tall in the big wide world of ours why did you bother in the first place to spray when you had nothing worthwhile to say (or write) at all stinky poison-pen or terse one word feedbacks please remove and remove all Its my opinion and I'm sticking to it. So many invested in sizing up others and invested in being right when they could otherwise be helpful or effective. Being small is just scoring off someone at their expense which ultimately ends up being at your own expense. I don't have to get political to illustrate this point. legal copyright for this poem/work and also for this author Melissa A Howells and also for this legally copyrighted site title: Meloo Straight From Her Tilt-a-World Vote for this poem |
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