John's poems of...LIFE - LIVING &LOVE...JDJ
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I don't, think that anyone, takes CRITICISM, very well
even though, they may stay, somber, and quiet, they do not feel, great and SWELL
CRITICISM, ,is UNKIND, and shoots a person, down, causing,hurts, and UNREST
why, make a person, feel, lower, than, their--BEST
For, those, who are so--FASY--to, point a finger, and put, another down, and--CRITICIZE
they, don't realize, ahead, for them--the--KARMA--what--LIES
Because, those, who are, so QUICK, to put, another so hardly, and hurtfully--DOWN
its only a matter of time, that they---SLIP, FALTER, TRIP, --FALL--ond---FROWN
So why be so hard on another, when they make a mistake
because sooner than latter we all, will make a mistake as--our life,living, and--LOVE--FATE
By John d JUNGERS. 22nd of DECEMBER. 2017
even though, they may stay, somber, and quiet, they do not feel, great and SWELL
CRITICISM, ,is UNKIND, and shoots a person, down, causing,hurts, and UNREST
why, make a person, feel, lower, than, their--BEST
For, those, who are so--FASY--to, point a finger, and put, another down, and--CRITICIZE
they, don't realize, ahead, for them--the--KARMA--what--LIES
Because, those, who are, so QUICK, to put, another so hardly, and hurtfully--DOWN
its only a matter of time, that they---SLIP, FALTER, TRIP, --FALL--ond---FROWN
So why be so hard on another, when they make a mistake
because sooner than latter we all, will make a mistake as--our life,living, and--LOVE--FATE
By John d JUNGERS. 22nd of DECEMBER. 2017
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I don`t think, that anyone, takes criticism, very well
I don`t think, that anyone, takes criticism, very well