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Feedback fever

How I’ve done is a mystery for sure

Did my best but could I do more?

Did I wear the right tie?

Did my shoes please your eye?

I can't rest 'til I get your reply


I might sell an olde banger on eBay

A fuss must be made straight away

What a wonderful chap, here's my lovely feedback

I'll be back to buy more

On payday


I've a duty to please all my peers

I'm mumbling and bumbling with fear

Did I bomb at the bell or did I do well?

Please tell me

I'm waiting to hear


I can't make a move without comment

Your licence, consent and acclaim

I must know for sure that you liked my rapport

I’m desperate

Please tell me I’m great


I can't do a thing without feedback

I must have approval forthwith

To get through the day

I must hear straight away

Of my brilliantly talented gift


What a wonderful poem you’ve written

I’m aghast, what a wizard with words

What a wonderful line

It’s far better than mine

I’m OK, it’ll pass, I’m just hurt


It’s a cognitive quirk in my psyche

I've had it confirmed at the quacks

I've been to my shrink

But he can't do a thing

'Til he's read his feedback and relaxed


© Joseph G Dawson

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