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The feedBACK still is not going Through
The FEEDBACK still is not going--THROUGH
And it's not causing a happy yellow warm color of SUNNY delight
But is causing a setting of Sad and disappointed--BLUE
Maybe it is just my DEVICE--and--IPAD
Then that would not be cool and would make me--SAD
So I hope this will be Squared-AWAY
And my feedback to other,--- Dear ---friends here on PoetryPoem
Goes through Perfectly--in--every--quick-tap and iPad-tip
AnyWAY
By John d JUNGERS
27th of AUGUST 2018
And it's not causing a happy yellow warm color of SUNNY delight
But is causing a setting of Sad and disappointed--BLUE
Maybe it is just my DEVICE--and--IPAD
Then that would not be cool and would make me--SAD
So I hope this will be Squared-AWAY
And my feedback to other,--- Dear ---friends here on PoetryPoem
Goes through Perfectly--in--every--quick-tap and iPad-tip
AnyWAY
By John d JUNGERS
27th of AUGUST 2018
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The feedBACK still is not going Through
The feedBACK still is not going Through