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FEEDBACK IN OPEN



~FEEDBACK IN OPEN~



I frowned then smiled
when I saw a happily
married man's feedback
ended up out in public
in the poet's Guestbook.

"Sweetheart," he wrote
to that young poetess
in the privacy of feedback
but copied and pasted
Guestbook showed it all.

I hope his wife doesn't
see that "Sweetheart"
written to a young girl.
If she does see that he
will be in big trouble.

Moral of the story is:
Give feedback as if it's
open to the people and
save the loving for
the one you love.

Kris ~ Dreamweaver.
www.poetrypoem.com/dreamweaver


NOTE: This is true. I saw my feedback copied and pasted in the guestbook of a poetess.
I saw many more feedback by others in the guestbook too. Among them there was one with
"SWEETHEART". I am not naming names. This was in 2008.











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