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You are a Poet.
Poetry is so important to you.
You love people to read your poems
and tell you what they think
about the poems and you
and tell you it all in a
feedback to you.

You love feedback to be nice
if people want to say
something bad about your poems
then they better go away
and never come back
to give feedback to you.

You get enough bad things
in your daily life
and this is your Corner
you love to hide.
you don't want bad people
upsetting you here
on the name of feedback
to your excellent poems.

You don't care how bad
feedback givers are.
as long as they give
nice feedback to you,
saying the rhyme and flow
are flawless, they
love your poems and love you.

You don't care
who they are.
A friend or an enemy,
an enemy of a friend,
a friend of a friend
or enemy of an enemy.
You have no scruples
as long as you get
excellent feedback;
you are not bothered.

It's private and only
you can read it,
so you don't mind
what they write to you,
as long as a part of it
is good feedback,
you don't mind if
the rest is vulgar
and flirting with you.

You do not object
their flirting with you
and the vulgar things
mixed with nice praise
of your poems and of you.

So you invite and
encourage them to write
vulgar things to you
by writing back to them
giving a green light
to be vulgar with you.

You love the feedback
and you don't care;
you would sell your soul
for nice feedback
to the Devil himself.

If you are exceptional
and you do care
who writes feedback
and what they say to you
and you don't tolerate
vulgar things to you,
you have my respect
I take my hat off to you.

Kris ~ Dreamweaver
www.poetrypoem.com/dreamweaver
6th April 2019.











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