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behind the clouds
hide blue skies and on the windshield are the long pulled tails of raindrops looking like the abbreviated journeys of common snails. I can think like that; clouded and dark and seemingly unable to acknowledge the sun and how it rises and shines somewhere each and every day. I've made the mistake of seeing my daily steps through life as plodding and routine, not taking into account whose paths I've crossed and in doing so, perhaps, changed the course of those paths. this is my wish for you (take what suits you...) whatever path you choose, my love, whatever sky you walk under may your path be long knowing that somewhere above you the sky (your sky) will always be a very deep, deep blue. Comment: Sometimes I tire of the feedback format here. Folks tend to interpret a writer's poem from their own vantage point and life experience. Often, though, something written so simply, is far from simplistic. This is far deeper than the simplicity of its language. Those who see and interpret and read this...I more than appreciate you. Summing someone's poetry with a simple "good, excellent etc...isn't the purpose of giving feedback its sharing, when you can, your support of the artist's word choice giving constructive criticism...and if you find a message or idea that makes an impression on you, then say something!!! Good/excellent etc is your opinon only and fails to convey/say much other than somethig about you. I learned this from my friends here, Yirrpa, Geisha, Ramona and many others... I hope you do as well. This is my hopefully constructive feedback. LEGAL COPYRIGHT FOR THIS POEM 7/6/2022 4:28PM PST TIME AND DATE STAMPED AND ALSO FOR THIS WRITER/POET/AUTHOR MELISSA A. HOWELLS AND ALSO FOR THIS LEGALLY COPYRIGHTED AND REGISTERED SITE TITLE: MELOO STRAIGHT FROM HER TILT-A-WORLD@ Vote for this poem |
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