Ren's Pen
A Heart to Care
I was sitting here reading your feedback,
And saw very clearly who it is your lack,
You say God and religion turns you off,
Even though the words were spoken soft.
What cause you to have low self esteem?
No spark in your soul, not even a gleam,
You seem to be wrapped in a hard shell,
This is so obvious, it is not hard to tell.
From your poems you have found a dark way,
I am not to judge you but I will pray,
Many claim you are so open and bold,
But the truth is your front is bogus and cold.
When I went to your poetry site,
I saw darkness without any light,
I bow and said a loving prayer,
That Jesus would give you a heart to care!
And saw very clearly who it is your lack,
You say God and religion turns you off,
Even though the words were spoken soft.
What cause you to have low self esteem?
No spark in your soul, not even a gleam,
You seem to be wrapped in a hard shell,
This is so obvious, it is not hard to tell.
From your poems you have found a dark way,
I am not to judge you but I will pray,
Many claim you are so open and bold,
But the truth is your front is bogus and cold.
When I went to your poetry site,
I saw darkness without any light,
I bow and said a loving prayer,
That Jesus would give you a heart to care!
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A Heart to Care
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