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WHEN THE FEELING IS GONE


    

       When you love a person for what she is,
       You offer the very best enough for a friend;
       You become ever loyal that makes her live again,
       Every time she’s in need,
         you reach out and succor.


       But one starry vesper
         as the night fell to sleep,
       When you need her the most,
         she’s nowhere to be found;
       When the whole world walked out,
         she never came in,
       She did not stand by you for she is a coward.

       You’re still together after such a distortion,
       Perhaps it’s necessary to give her
         another chance;
       Maybe she can still prove her worth,
         oh yes as a friend,
       But topsy-turvy is your mind,
         aren’t you erroneous this time?


       She promised you the best
         and won’t deny you for whatsoever,
       Won’t take you for granted
         and will stick to you;
       Won’t listen to others
         if they’ll bring you apart,
       But gosh, she really can be brainwashed easily!


       You don’t have anymore enthusiasm
         for her comradeship,
       Your loyalty and affection are not fully at hand;
       For that great pretender who must suffer the most,            
       Just go and move on
         because all your feelings are gone.


SALLIE, the Poetic Journalist                                      







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