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YOU ARE MY LIGHT ( Daveda's Hybrid Concrete Candle Style )

BEAUTIFUL IS LOVE ( The Blitz Style )

YOU ARE MY EVERYTHING ( Free Verse)

SO VERY REAL AND TRUE ( Waltz Waves )

COME MY LOVE ( Waltz Waves )



YOU WHOM I LOVE SO MUCH AND MORE (Waltz Waves)

SO VERY DEEP INSIDE ME ( Waltz Waves )

DAY AND NIGHT ( Waltz Waves)

MY DEAREST DARLING ( Waltz Waves )

YOU MEAN EVERYTHING TO ME ( Waltz Waves )

MR. WONDERFUL YOU ( Rictameter )

MOONBEAMS AND YOU ( Rictameter )

TRUE FRIENDSHIP ( Couplet )

BELIEVE IN YOURSELF ( Butterfly )

S U M M E R ( Dorian 42 )

THE SWAN KING ( Key To My Heart)

BUILDER OF DREAMS ( Key To My Heart )

YOU ARE ( Etheree)

MOONGLOW ( Rictameter )

THE HIBISCUS DANCE ( Butterfly )

HAPPY AND BRIGHT ( The Bell )

YOU ARE MY WHOLE WORLD ( Cascade )

YOUR PRECIOUS LOVE ( Cinquain )

HE'LL GIVE YOU LOVE PEACE AND HOPE ( Quatern)

LOVE CAN BRING A SONG ( Serpentine Nonet )

THE RAINBOW CONNECTION ( Rhyme)

ALWAYS (Quatern )

THANK YOU GOD ( The Bell )

VESSEL OF LIGHT ( Vessel Of Light )

YOUR VERY BEAUTIFUL LOVE ( Trine )

YOU ( Jesus Tears )

THE RED THE WHITE AND THE BLUE (Free Verse)

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Is There Life After The Web?????




SultryRose's Signatures







~THERE'S SOMETHING WRONG WITH THIS PICTURE~
(humorous poem)


There's something here for certain very wrong
When I see everyday all this ads advertised on t.v
They show me this and they show me that,oh my poor head hurts!
They trying to make me look like a clown or just a loser!

Things that I wouldn't have believed it
If I wasn't watching it myself with this two very eyes of mine
Products of every size, kind and colors
To accommodate every pocket and the most descriminated taste...ouhhhh!

Things of all sorts like how to lose some of your weight and fat...
Five,ten and even 25 pounds over a weekend or in less than two week
And as many inches all over your body in less time
Than you would, taking a walk in the park!

But if you believe all this you must also believe that dogs can fly
Because I bet you that most of these instant miracles man- made
Is maybe only your money-pocket that they will make it small
Your bank account is the other one, that they may also shrink in less than two weeks time!!

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Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2004







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