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A spat in space.

'Thats it we've had enough'
Cried the planets in unison
For they were fed up
With Earths constant voyerism.

Except the Sun whose thoughts
on this matter quite vain
Could'nt understand why this would fill
the planets with such disdain.

For the Sun enjoyed it's status
at the center of things
Happy was the star to know
of the warmth to others it brings.

Could it be the planets feel within
the solar system rather superfluous?
As in the relation to the great orbit of things
they serve no purpose?

So they left their orbits to discuss
their present status
Leaving the Earths voyerism
on a suspended hiatus.


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A spat in space.