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I Love My Readers!I wanted to thank all of my loyal readers~When I stop writing for awhile, my best friend reminds me how many people read my poetry~people I don't even know about~and then you send me a message that you'd been reading for awhile or visit my site frequently~and you just don't know how that makes my day! Please continue to leave your beautiful feedback and stay inspired~You are MY inspiration to go on days when I feel I have no words left to write, you give me the strength and motivation to keep searching for that ever elusive next poem...It will take a while, but I am working on a book manuscript in my "spare time"~will certainly let everyone know when I have more news~Peace and may the muse be with you! Love, Lori Upon Watching Phantom of the Opera Rating: Excellent I guess I've never seen that one. You put nice words to the scene. Regards Disharmonic Arrythmias Rating: Excellent Very nice yours and the other person. A different touch for the world of poetry. bye Intimated Rating: Excellent Very nice your making me blush, not really, very dear pictures you have made in my mind. The cuddling skin thing to me is more than just a turn on. Regards The Synchronicity of Heartbreak Rating: Excellent Very nice Lorri I wish I were your friend. You seem to be a very nice person. I like book stores the mall in Jefferson City has none anymore. I guess I will have to look elsewhere. Keep writing girl. Questions That Will Never Have Answers Rating: Excellent Very nice Lorri this one made me feel as if I were the fella you were hugging. Full Moon Friday Rating: Excellent Very sad and sweet Lori. For what its worth Lorri if I were dieing I would wish for you to be by my side. It reminds me of a poem I wrote for a lady. She wanted poets to write a poem for a baby names Robert he had cancer. My poem was titled A poets prayer for baby Robert. I wrote it a couple of years ago I often wondered how the baby was doing. I recently seen this lady on your-poetry.com site her name is ******. I asked her how baby Robert was doing she told me he didn't make it. That hurt more than a dog bite tears filled my eyes. And of course I wondered why. Thanks for all your feedback Lorri. I hope I'm talking to you like two humans should. And I love your words of poetry. Misty Awakening Rating: Excellent Very sweet, I just wanted to say I forgot to mention when I said I have a daughter named Jessica. The odd thing when you said that purple was her favorite color, the same for my daughter she likes purple also. I have a headach I'll say good night, I will read more of your good writes. Please let me know if you get your book in print I want to buy one from you. Thanks Tropical Tera Rimza Rating: Excellent Nice you have enough for a book here. Let me know I want a signed copy OK? Thursday Evening Villanelle Rating: Excellent Nice a little off from the original, I have a nice one a tad off it is called Wasp, and Bees, Bees, and Wasps. In my Villanelle I also used iambic form mixed in with it very tough I know what you mean when you say your counting the beat of syllables. I liked your vill though Blue Haiku Rating: Excellent Very nice I just couldn't pass up a Haiku. good job Tsunami Rating: Excellent I just couldn't pass this one up, as I was clicking through your titles. I have been contemplating writing one on tsunami also. I was looking for the one you won the contest with. Is it in here? regards T-Shirt Rating: Excellent Hmmm, very sensuous very nice words Lorri Michele, My Belle Rating: Excellent Yes very touching I take it you live in Ill. I live in Mo. your neighbor so to speak In A Chocola't Dream Rating: Excellent Very original twist, sexy and lucrative Dancing Again Rating: Excellent I wrote a poem for a stripper once it was called [Savage]That was her stage name. never saw her again my brother in law talked me into going in, never sense though. I will read more of your words very seldom do I do that unless their words intrige me. If you don't mind read and comment on mine called **********. My friend died 2 years ago this June. I have been thinking about traveling across the U.S. and writing Haikus all the way, people seen to like most of them. take care Crawl Stroke Rating: Excellent Very sweet let me ask, have you ever won an award for your writing? I think you have a talent in my eyes anyway. I've had people call me shakespeare, to Whitman. LOL yeah...I wish hey keep those beautiful words of yours flowing. Regards Jessica Rating: Excellent Very nice poem. Yes I see why they fall for you very captivating lady you are. My daughter is Jessica she is 15. You write nice poetry will you please comment on one of mine Jessica Rating: Excellent Yes, I think it's great! You're fantastic! Dancing Again Rating: Excellent Through your poem, the way you write - brings the image to my mind like I am there watching you dance. Wow! Questions That Will Never Have Answers Rating: Excellent I've read this poem before and I like it better each time that I read it! E-mail me Lori when you write some new poetry that is posted here. I have a question to ask you when you e-mail me. Come Inside Rating: Excellent Very passionate Lori! Excellent poem! Questions That Will Never Have Answers Rating: Excellent How are you New Beginnings - Day 18 Rating: Excellent Intimated Rating: Excellent Very sensual, would like to see that happen Be Still Rating: Excellent awh.....loved the story in this poem....bitter sweet and nicely written.. Misty Awakening Rating: Good Really nice writing here.... My Prayer Rating: Excellent Excellent poem! I try to get to your site a few times each week. Thanks for your comments about my poems. From reading your poetry, it appears you've had a very interesting life. You've captured my interest. If you feel comfortable, write me and tellme about yourself. If you don't that's ok. My Editor Says Rating: Excellent As long as you write what you feel - that's what is important. You are geunine. T-Shirt Rating: Excellent I have read this poem a number of times and it never loses its passion. Your writing is so intense! Excellent!!! In A Chocola't Dream Rating: Excellent You are so passionate in your poetry and also in life I would assume. Excellent poem! I'm Busy, Baby Rating: Excellent You write so well Lori! Polygamy Rating: Excellent Right! Is this yours? Very good! This poem brought a smile to my face. No boredom, well at least not for the man! I Am Rating: Excellent Excellent poem Lori! The Synchronicity of Heartbreak Rating: Excellent Excllent Lori!!! T-Shirt Rating: Excellent Wow!!!Your poetry is so wrapped in such emotion. I like everything of yours that I have read so far! Your writing reveals to me a very fascinating, beiatiful, loving woman. Much happiness Lori! Questions That Will Never Have Answers Rating: Excellent Sad poem. He has to regret not staying with you. Written from the heart, genuine! You're great Lori! Be Still Rating: Excellent Excellent poem Lori! You're fantastic!!! Misty Awakening Rating: Excellent You possess a wonderful style in your writing! Intimated Rating: Excellent Wow. You are an incredibly passionate woman! Excellent poem! In A Chocola't Dream Rating: Excellent I am a chef and love to write..food is sensual and you could feel the words. Tres bien!! Tsunami Rating: Good i hope we have a few more poems about this , so we never forget that through death , there is life , love , remembrance . Tsunami Rating: Excellent Your writing is amazingly good Upon Watching Phantom of the Opera Rating: Excellent What does the word "Loriet" mean? Do you mean Poet Laureate? Through Your Eyes Rating: Excellent I have to admit this is one of my favorite from all the poems that I have already read of yours. You have a unique balance and yout character shines through in this poem, It is uplifting and a true awakening of the spirit and the heart and the soul. Keep writing you have a beautiful gift in your poetry . What a wonderful blessing to have such a wonderful talent.Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift with fellow poets. Tsunami Rating: Average This poem is touching, but it just doesn't fall into the category of portry in my view Muse of Mother Mary Rating: Excellent Very good. I love writing these kind of poems. Finally Ifound someone else who enjoys writing them. Great Job! Keep Writing. Unzipping Logic Rating: Excellent very appropriate applesauce, indeed. Ghost Rating: Excellent This poems, which transposes "I (subject)" into objects of "I." somewhat reminds of the technique used by the Palestinian poetess Rita Odeh. A fresh air in the way romantic poetry can be written. Giving Birth Rating: Excellent Darm woman what can I say, youve described perfection, that ultimate act of being, and in words that one can feel and journey with you. I take it you must be a nurse?? Well your pen is a fantastic place to be when you write such poetic wonders such as this. Most beautiful lassie Ghost Rating: Excellent Purrrrrfect, the feel and texture ummmm, you are really good at crafting your words and feelings together I'm Busy, Baby Rating: Excellent Bravo...you do have a way with words lassie...loved the line that bithing moon... An Ordinary Day Rating: Excellent A wonderful wrire--About time too lassie-- I was worrying about ya lol....War is such a horrible thing, how petti mans need to prove his dominion upon this planet. This lass is a very good write.. something we all should ponder and ponder hard. New Beginnings - Day 20 Rating: Excellent Waiting to see somemore from your inspired pen woman.. Tapping fingers impatiently lol New Beginnings - Day 20 Rating: Excellent Fantastic write lassie.... Bravo--- theres not much more I can say your poem said it all... New Beginnings - Day 7 Rating: Excellent I liked lassie your a grand wee writer.. New Beginnings - Day 5 Rating: Excellent Wonmderful write Lori...Sometimes I think we get so wrapped up in our lifes that we forget what we are there for... Its always the love, mean may have a hard time saying it-- But they do feel it... Loved this poem, very expressive and held my attention and thoughts Bravo Poetry Ad-Free Upgrades Vote for this poem
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