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I've been criticized for the way I write
asked what good is morales in these present times
I respect your opinion grant me the same
or just over look my rhyme's




You said I should write to gain attention
something vulgar something crass
well thank you for your suggestion
but its not me, so I have to pass




You said who cares whats right or wrong
 and no one lives  by the golden rule
Well forgive me but I have to say
I don't think its me, thats the fool




So in closing please let me say
you can criticize all you choose
if you think your words can hurt me
then I'm proud to say you loose




deb/nana5




Someone who wouldn't leave a name
doesn't like me adding morales
into my poems, they say there's
no good left in the world. I disagree











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