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A poet commented on my writing
As I did last night at this time
Forgive me if you feel I was righting
By how I feel about your rhythm and your rhyme

I try to give my first impression
Excuse me, for I am usually tactless
My poetry is my confession
Perhaps grown hard, as life's been far from backless

To me, poetry is emotion
To cj, God's Grace has it flowing
To Nurse Candy, 20 years seen death's devotion
To poetry feedback club, what the hell am I knowing?

Except: God is Love
Except: Blessings of his Grace
Except: The sun will soon rise up above
Except: If I comment on your poetry, I mean your expression no

7/23/2006 0447 cj
new to feedback club on 7/22/2006 cj

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