Absent Minded
compare your guestbook to mine
allow me to retort
now that you know just how incredible you are
and how much attention you are getting for next to nothing
had they have not seen your face im surte it would be different
but alas
im the spawn of satan for being sad
im the jerk of the writing class
stirring the pot
You people are little suck ups
hoping one day some talent will rub off
hey ayt least i can admit im a jealous vindictive dim wit
but you know what
all your poems suck just like mine
they made no sense
they werent written properly
and alkl you have tp say to someone who has something to say
is that i complain too much
Well go onb sign my guestbook with more ill words so i can go around
and see just how untalented i am for feeling and writing
and you know what
just because i dont write with the prose oif the rose and illiterations to kill tjhe nation
and salutation that make no sense no matter what way you put htem
because non eof you think about what you are writing or how your craft is a science
leave me more rude feedback so i can laugh
and then point at me and say hey the jerk is back
andd go on to play nice
somewhere else like i deserve that
knowing your rude only to me for no reason
no reason at all
and now im jealous that the things i think about for months before i put them to papoer
arent worthy of a nice write
or your kudod congratulations im sick of hannding out
here i am history
the shunned author
complaining once agian
its like the day hates the weather
and the sun vomits because we know
all the flower have pretty names and thorns
and if you put them together you wpould see the message of the gardner i am
so come read my guestbook and compare it to everyuone elses who is just lame
i keep it real brother
whatever i couldnbt be bothered
more injustice
probably because you are rednecks and i am gay
heaven forbid i be anything you dont understand
so dont offer me a chance to get published
because im not spellchecking and you havent done any research
dont take your time to stop by and listen to this squeaky wheel try to justify your stupidity and crimes
you want me to show you how to write an dmake you all jealous
when all you do is step on other people stoes
ooooh ahhh a goo didea i'll use that in my next poem
an originator of thought that you cant be bought
and my nerves are shot but you know what my mouth just dropped when
i read all of those peoples feedbacks guestbooks and they are living a double life
for they dump on me all their woes and hate
walk aweay turn the page
and now they just made it rain for days on me
full well knowing im living a nightmare
they get congradulated for their wonderfull poems
that i think stink
because thet didnt think at all
and because mine arent as perfect as yours and have flaws like all of you jerk offs
my works have a soul
so heres a rant for all of you who come to me and leave me rude remarks
then go on to say nice things to everyone else because fore years
i had no idea you were capable of saying such nice things as i was on the verge of suicide and you all jusyt told me to go ahead
Im out i'm done
theyre not perfect but works in progress
if a publisher was smart hed look at this and say
if he spent more time on his stuff
which im capable of theyd be great
but im not for free going to give you a priceless thing
when im not getting paid
so stiuck that where trhe sun dont shine you loust preaching
suck up
wishing some talent would com eoff on you leaches
and dont think for asecond i dont have another site where itruyly shine
and ypouve signed my guestbooks twice
once very kindly and once full of spite
this world sickens me
and you are thre crime
and i want justice from your freedom of speach taken form me
now that you know just how incredible you are
and how much attention you are getting for next to nothing
had they have not seen your face im surte it would be different
but alas
im the spawn of satan for being sad
im the jerk of the writing class
stirring the pot
You people are little suck ups
hoping one day some talent will rub off
hey ayt least i can admit im a jealous vindictive dim wit
but you know what
all your poems suck just like mine
they made no sense
they werent written properly
and alkl you have tp say to someone who has something to say
is that i complain too much
Well go onb sign my guestbook with more ill words so i can go around
and see just how untalented i am for feeling and writing
and you know what
just because i dont write with the prose oif the rose and illiterations to kill tjhe nation
and salutation that make no sense no matter what way you put htem
because non eof you think about what you are writing or how your craft is a science
leave me more rude feedback so i can laugh
and then point at me and say hey the jerk is back
andd go on to play nice
somewhere else like i deserve that
knowing your rude only to me for no reason
no reason at all
and now im jealous that the things i think about for months before i put them to papoer
arent worthy of a nice write
or your kudod congratulations im sick of hannding out
here i am history
the shunned author
complaining once agian
its like the day hates the weather
and the sun vomits because we know
all the flower have pretty names and thorns
and if you put them together you wpould see the message of the gardner i am
so come read my guestbook and compare it to everyuone elses who is just lame
i keep it real brother
whatever i couldnbt be bothered
more injustice
probably because you are rednecks and i am gay
heaven forbid i be anything you dont understand
so dont offer me a chance to get published
because im not spellchecking and you havent done any research
dont take your time to stop by and listen to this squeaky wheel try to justify your stupidity and crimes
you want me to show you how to write an dmake you all jealous
when all you do is step on other people stoes
ooooh ahhh a goo didea i'll use that in my next poem
an originator of thought that you cant be bought
and my nerves are shot but you know what my mouth just dropped when
i read all of those peoples feedbacks guestbooks and they are living a double life
for they dump on me all their woes and hate
walk aweay turn the page
and now they just made it rain for days on me
full well knowing im living a nightmare
they get congradulated for their wonderfull poems
that i think stink
because thet didnt think at all
and because mine arent as perfect as yours and have flaws like all of you jerk offs
my works have a soul
so heres a rant for all of you who come to me and leave me rude remarks
then go on to say nice things to everyone else because fore years
i had no idea you were capable of saying such nice things as i was on the verge of suicide and you all jusyt told me to go ahead
Im out i'm done
theyre not perfect but works in progress
if a publisher was smart hed look at this and say
if he spent more time on his stuff
which im capable of theyd be great
but im not for free going to give you a priceless thing
when im not getting paid
so stiuck that where trhe sun dont shine you loust preaching
suck up
wishing some talent would com eoff on you leaches
and dont think for asecond i dont have another site where itruyly shine
and ypouve signed my guestbooks twice
once very kindly and once full of spite
this world sickens me
and you are thre crime
and i want justice from your freedom of speach taken form me
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