Heart Of The Matter
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It's been a while
It passes fast
The working week.....
A dancing class
It seems as though
The hills are lost
The sun is gone
The flowers tossed
But when I can
I find the time
To view YOUR WORDS
AND read your RHYME
( I held the shift
The CAPS got STUCK
That's how my typing
Went to * @ # * )
Your viewing now
Is doing fine
Your thousands well past
Ninety-nine
Your gigolo looks
Really crazy
An old demented
Patrick Swayze!
I don't think he
Could steal my heart
He looks more like
A sad old f@rt!
As usual - I must
Lower the tone
Nit-pick, swear
Or give a moan
The muse it's shrivelled
In my head
I think it's time
I went to bed
Night Night
(Some feedback I received for ‘Gigolo',
Thank you friend! I love it!
Glad you liked him…" lol lol)
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