The other day
I read some free poems,then I read this one…
One time and then twice and then three times…
And more, till the sun went down and I couldn't have more fun
I still can't believe it, but there was this particular
Poem, that I didn't really quite understand it,
At all,it didn't make any sense to me, now thinking
About it I didn't even like it at all, I have to admit it…
In the first place this so called free poem,
Didn't have any rhythm or any rhyme,
No rhyme! Are you kidding me!That wasn't nice,
And I am so mad,because I really wasted my time
No wonder it was advertised...
As a free poem right there in that place in the net, well to me
They just don't look like poems at all,as for being free,
I doubt anyone would like to go thru the hell that I was put thru.
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2007
