Absent Minded
This weeks Feedback poem (Riddle of the True and wise)
Riddle of the true and wise
There once was a nice poem
it was intreiguing
written to make one think
many thought its answer was true and wise
an awesome poem
whose answer left you thinking
you genius you
There once was a nice man
who was true and wise
he was intriguing and was awesome
at making people think
you genius you he always wanted them to say
so once upon a daydream
he sat and wrote something awesome
The truth of wisdom
is a nice gesture you turn into an awesome through time
kept intriguying and reworking what makes them think
everyone is a genius
and the severa;l hooks and layters of every piece of literature
speaks to the true and wise
a nice poem is awesome when it reaches out in different wavelengths
you genius you they will say
when all seven walks of life
follow their stories and meet up
from this one nioce poem
and see the characters they are
true and wise
intriguing characters of a riddle to make them think
awesome really
and to me and us we will say to eachother
you genius you
Thank you for the critism thank you for the feedback
thank you for the bits and pieces that made me everytrhing i am today
If only i could show you how you have made me true and wise
if only ic ould show you the genius i am
the bitter truth of the harsh wisdoms
from the nice poems of gathered thoughts left unwritten
still intriguing you walk away from me to walk away from you
awesome they say
and you had no clue
you genius you
you genius you
if it wasnt for me youd be nothing
if it wasnt for you id never be here
we made it together
blind leading the blind
im your broken toy now piece me together
This weeks feedback
Felt your love Feedback provided by: vickiec
aweseome, simply awesome ~vickiec
2007-09-27 17:24:11
Don't mess with a writer Feedback provided by: sweetcuppincakes
so true and wise, your words are
2007-09-27 17:23:39
another tainted saint different than you Feedback provided by: sweetcuppincakes
you geniusyou
2007-09-24 09:28:45
skipper My mixed up reality Feedback provided by: skipper
a nice poem
2007-09-23 09:41:48
Writing my own bible Feedback provided by: poetry337
intriguing write, makes one think, excellent. Meg
This was this weeks feedback, many of my recetn poems are going to be based on the feedback i have recieved and i am going to be making poems out of the key words and suggestions etcetera, i will be making poetic comments corrections and regurgitatiung advbice and twisting words, but you will see where i got my words from, and see who is steering who in this mess. maybe we're better off this way? m,aybe were better off this way
There once was a nice poem
it was intreiguing
written to make one think
many thought its answer was true and wise
an awesome poem
whose answer left you thinking
you genius you
There once was a nice man
who was true and wise
he was intriguing and was awesome
at making people think
you genius you he always wanted them to say
so once upon a daydream
he sat and wrote something awesome
The truth of wisdom
is a nice gesture you turn into an awesome through time
kept intriguying and reworking what makes them think
everyone is a genius
and the severa;l hooks and layters of every piece of literature
speaks to the true and wise
a nice poem is awesome when it reaches out in different wavelengths
you genius you they will say
when all seven walks of life
follow their stories and meet up
from this one nioce poem
and see the characters they are
true and wise
intriguing characters of a riddle to make them think
awesome really
and to me and us we will say to eachother
you genius you
Thank you for the critism thank you for the feedback
thank you for the bits and pieces that made me everytrhing i am today
If only i could show you how you have made me true and wise
if only ic ould show you the genius i am
the bitter truth of the harsh wisdoms
from the nice poems of gathered thoughts left unwritten
still intriguing you walk away from me to walk away from you
awesome they say
and you had no clue
you genius you
you genius you
if it wasnt for me youd be nothing
if it wasnt for you id never be here
we made it together
blind leading the blind
im your broken toy now piece me together
This weeks feedback
Felt your love Feedback provided by: vickiec
aweseome, simply awesome ~vickiec
2007-09-27 17:24:11
Don't mess with a writer Feedback provided by: sweetcuppincakes
so true and wise, your words are
2007-09-27 17:23:39
another tainted saint different than you Feedback provided by: sweetcuppincakes
you geniusyou
2007-09-24 09:28:45
skipper My mixed up reality Feedback provided by: skipper
a nice poem
2007-09-23 09:41:48
Writing my own bible Feedback provided by: poetry337
intriguing write, makes one think, excellent. Meg
This was this weeks feedback, many of my recetn poems are going to be based on the feedback i have recieved and i am going to be making poems out of the key words and suggestions etcetera, i will be making poetic comments corrections and regurgitatiung advbice and twisting words, but you will see where i got my words from, and see who is steering who in this mess. maybe we're better off this way? m,aybe were better off this way
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This weeks Feedback poem (Riddle of the True and wise)
This weeks Feedback poem (Riddle of the True and wise)
