Yes i have to agree
I did write something
What did i write
It wasn't meant to be a prose poem
Just a God poem
Thanks for the negative feedback
I was able to improve this and make it
Better
See we need positive and negative in life
It can't all be positive
Then it will be dull and boring and you know
Perfect when perfect really isn't all that great
So thanks for helping me improve my poem and make it better than ever
Love you loads whoever you were
You left no details so i cannot thank you
The poem was called Surprise Surprise (God poem)
Good job you made me look at it properly again and think of it again
XXX GOD BLESS
I am so impressed and deadly pleased you were honest i sincerely wish to thank you
