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 <*> Diamonds In The Raw <*>
DIAMOND


My daughter says her boyfiend gives trouble
She appears to be living in a romantic bubble

Young men at his age rarely walk the chalk line
She has to do a lot of polishing to make him shine

You see, young men are like diamonds in the raw
Before they are highly polished they have many flaws
 
Eveyone knows behind a man there is a great woman
At first many young ladies do not quite understand  

Men need guidance after they leave Mother's hand
After that big day when he offers a wedding band

So quit the grumbling my dear and begin the course
Be patient as he learns with TLC and not force

You'll beam with pride at the change in him
Your cup of joy will spill over at the brim
 copyrightŠ2008Irene 

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Develope a positive faith-filled attitude
Negative thinking blinds you to the blessings of God
Be patient and faithful while waiting on your groom.



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