{please turn on ur speakers, some poems have music, AND PLEASE LEAVE FEEDBACK TO TELL ME HOW YOU FELT AND WHAT YOU THOUGHT ABOUT MY POEMS, THANK YOU...I AM TRYING TO BECOME A BETTER WRITER BUT IT TAKES TIME}
(also i am working on my site, if you can't read a poem, highlight it like you are going to copy and paste it but dont copy it problem solved, and then use the arrows on the side to scroll up nad dont complain about my images background or whatever its really annoying and im aware)
Here are some links for other great sites on the web...please check them out:
http://dmoz.org/Arts/Literature/Poetry/Performance_and_Presentation/
http://www.shambles.net/pages/staff/poetry/
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1iJRP5idzQM
http://www.poets.org/page.php/prmID/83
you've made it this far, let me see your scars, you're bound and broken, but at least we can see the stars, rest here awhile my friend, come close let me in, ask me your treasured secrets gently and i will tell you where i put them........feel free to undress your soul and roam around in this empty tortured mind, writing is my life and I'm only going to get better at it with constructive feedback so like a weed that needs the sun, lay it on me and tell me what you think, i don't mind the tears they help me overcome the pain, i don't mind the pain it reminds me I'm still alive, i don't mind the days it gives me something to write.
I have something here that everyone can relate to, and if I'm not what your looking for tell me what it is your looking for, this is my craft and i want to be appealing dark and mysterious, somewhat upsetting, but mystical, let me hear your opinions I'm a grown man and you wont hurt my feelings.
Be sure you leave a comment on everything or every other piece you write so i can reconstruct the poems for the best interest of mankind and psychological warfare of political values and other BS in selfish interest to spreada religious disease into advertising that makes you buy expensive soap and toothpaste other than the cheap stuff, don't be rude, tell me your opinions, your feelings, your compassion, your hate mail, your humors your armored intellect, of religious dogmas ill lead you through to reality you may not see with your rose colored glasses on as i command you to put them on and take them off through one read to the next depending on which band you're listening to in the background.......I'm surrendering a feat of unequal measure and i have let you in a man brainwashed to think he is god a man brainwashed by the Illuminati medicated after being possessed by demons who blinds you with the truth reaching out for help like a Stephen kind novel who sees now clearly how to lead the world through the psycho babble, steer yourself through the maze of this disasterpiece and ask yourself questions before you pick through the hidden hooks of esoteric seeds to find Ive given you no real answers just a retaliation and a protest to the controlled music industry controlling my mind
in layer that the t.v cannot comprehend.......am i truly this insane? turn the page lead me to sanity with your prayers of crime scenes and dead babies, and recognize your reflection in the mesmerized wreck i am in the news pages
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